manicpsychotic wrote:
The timeline is 19 pages! Trim it down a lot.
If that's your only complaint, I take it as a compliment

fellblade wrote:
I notice that the background is similar (dare I say identical?) to the background from Legend of the Five Rings/Clan War. And this saddens me. I had hoped for a more Warhammer world version of Nippon, or Naippon, and not just a rehash of another game's backstory.
- As I said in the first post, yes the fluff is from L5R, I am not trying to hide that. It just seemed like a waste of time trying to come up with something based on the same thing that wouldn't turn out nearly as good. I simply moved Rokugan to the Warhammer world, and changed a few things to fit it in there better.
fellblade wrote:
Have you made nice with the owners of that intellectual property? 'Cause Games Workshop is not the only company out there who can toss around Cease & Desist notices.
- I have not. But they are very welcome to sue me for something I don't make money on, nor do I make their own books redundant as you still cannot play L5R using this book. Also, as a poor student, they won't get anything from me anyway

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Dread Pirate Rob wrote:
I like your previous books, but this is such a blatant steal from the L5R universe that I can't really approve of it
You can't really call it fan-made if made by another company...
- What is fan-made is the actual army list and rules to play with. The background is just extra sprinkles on top for those who want to know more.